Final products and Feedback (Health)

 Poster


Feedback

The primary criticism of my poster was that people couldn't tell who the target audience was, as well as the poster being empty. The aspect people enjoyed the most was the use of bright colors. People could easily identify the message of my poster. Overall my next poster should appeal more towards my target demographic whilst being more detailed. Some people criticized the use of a silhouette instead of a human face, which I disagree with as the silhouette is suppose to be vague as a reflection of the audience.

This is my poster's second draft acknowledging audience feedback, I added more to the background such as music notes which will hopefully communicate the demographic of the poster better. I changed the font and size of the text as that was another complaint from my audience.

Overall I prefer the updated poster design as the background is more unique and interesting as well as communicating who the poster is for. The colors are vibrant but not too bright which allows the audience's eyes to rest on the background. The silhouette acts as an audience surrogate, it also creates contrast with the green background, the design is spaced out and isn't cluttered. If I were to change anything I might change the font of the text as well as where the text is placed on the poster.


One criticism I saw of my poster was that instead of the silhouette I should have a model instead, I disagree with this however as the silhouette is intentionally suppose to be vague so that the audience can view themselves in that role. I created a mock-up in response to the feedback featuring a model in the place of the silhouette.


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